I agree with you about the ending, but I think the rest of the poem is absolutely wonderful, and I'm putting it in my favorites.

um, wow. this poem is truly awesome. very relatable and very blunt. i wouldn't change one thing about this. the word choice is flawless and i love the lines "it's hard to look on the bright side of night." keep it up!

no matter what you say, i love it, i think its a lovely piece of work, it is depressing but im quite depressive lately any way so it more explained the depression to me than caused me to be depressed. well its great, keep writing, if this is anything to go by then your great at it.

i can really relate to this poem. it is very well written and means a lot to me. keep up the good work.