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| zariccc 2004-09-24 ch 1,  | abuseI agree with your other reviewers. BUT. I like your ideas in this. |
| Rhyssa Dragonlady 2003-09-04 ch 1, | abuseDo the line breaks thing and make it dramatic poetry. Would be incredible. The stage setup rather detracts from the point. |
| Manaliabrid 2001-09-14 ch 1, | abuseDeep but needs more content. |