Ahahah, that's cute. I like it!

Now, chile, you done gone an got that all wrong. You listen up here, now, I aint gonna tell ya but once. That there last line, its sposed to go like dis here: Dat it Aint s'post to make no sense

See there? Now thats how we real southerners talk!

=)

Max

Concise, and smile-provoking. It's almost like a limerick - there's an integrated rhythm to it. I like the accent very much. Also an amusing take on poetry in general. Made me laugh.

:~) I like it.

sorry to correct you, but i'm bored AND i just read ROOTS, QUEEN, GONE WITH THE WIND, and SCARLETT. if you don't know, those all take place in the south, and th slaves and stuff talked like that. it would be "coclusyon" maybe not spelled like that, but said that way.

Um... okay... right... That was different... Good job?