i'm going to give you soe advice on how to make your stories better for the readers. when you write put spaces between the paragraphs so it's easier to read and it helps keep me in my place. also i found the story quite confusing, so maybe you could explane things a little better. but apart from that, i loved the story

sounds ok

I heart this story and am dying for a sequel, but I want Serra and Alex to hook up. She likes to screw with people's heads, doesn't she?

That was great!! can't wait for the sequel!!!

O.M.G!!!!!!!!!!! Not much to write, but I GOTTA keep reading!!!

Good chapter... I probaly won't be able to read all this in one night...

A great story with a good plot. Definitely worth your time reading. Exciting, dangerous, with an added sense of humour, what more can I ask? A sequel to it? Yup!

Hey, that was good! I only have 1 question, how old is she? It's soooooooooooo good!! Pleaz write another chapter soon!! I wanna know what happens!!
~EclipseKlutz