I really like your poem. Right before I read it I had just had a fight with my Dad and this is so close to how I felt.

I can completely relate, to the whole song. I end some nights in tears over petty little things that my family argues over. They keep saying I don't care, when they have to clue how much I do...its sad. I can relate, totally. Once more, a great song, keep up the good work.

TGWErica

I love your writing! You're very talented. This song is my favorite out of what I've read of your writings so far.I can relate alot to this song. My family is always fighting no matter what.

awesome. i argue with my dad alot. but thats about it. totally kick ass song though. good work

that is quite good, i fight with my brother all the time. but otherwise we're actually a rather close-knit family. My brother's knots appear to have come undone, thats all really.

good work, I will look at your other "art".

That was really good, I can relate.

great. going on my favorites.

::shivers:: It sounds like I know you...it sounds like my family

that is so my family. i get into fights with my mom a lot (we had one last night over me dyeing my hair) and i'm always incredibly pissed off and depressed after an arguement. but anyways, it's a great song coming from a great and talented writer. keep up the great work!

Oh, this song is so sad. You did a really good job writing it.

I feel like crying and not only because this was so expressive. But because i've had fights like this with my parents. Its easy to relate to. But try and put it past you. Make a goal in life hold it above your head so that its just out of reach and so you have something to keep working for. And then when it's finally time to stand up as high as you can and grab that goal-it will be worth it and youll be glad you didnt give up. Well, i may sound kinda preachy but it works for me and im able to work past all the fights and guilt and anger.

I guess I cannot totally relate to this song..? I disagree with my parents, but fate dealt me a cruel hand and I am totally shy, so I hardly stand up to anyone.. In my family, I think it's favortism. I hate that.. America sure has a great rep for families. Psh.

I don't really know what to say...yeah, I can identify...and I'm sorry you have it like that too...seems to be common now adays, huh? The Great Freaking American Family...