|Reviews for Hourglass|
| skylines 4/14/06 . chapter 1
| blood thirst 33 2/14/05 . chapter 1
I really like this one. it flows well
| daphnegray78 1/2/04 . chapter 1
Wonderful flow...it has a great beat to it, which really makes the poem. I especially liked the way yours rhymed but did not seem childish and you did not make it fit into normal formatting. Great job!