This is really touching and the repetition is very effective, the rhyming scheme is also very good. I'm glad you have something to hold on to. Well done, its fab and gives me hope. Thank you x

How sweeeeeeeeet. :P

Your stuff has alot of Imagerry and metaphors that I really love! Keep Writing, if you know what's good for you! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAH

(totally empty threat)