hmm, its generally good and heartfelt, a bit too rambly as in it repeats the same point over and over again, a bit could be cut out in my honest opinion, has a good flow though, nicely done

! Very good. I loved it. It does ramble a little, but it works that way. I love it :)

Ehh, I can't believe no one's reviewed this poem. I was just skipping around and ran across this, and, well, I really like it; doesn't sound like simple rambling to me. Er, sorry. I'm really bad at reviewing. To sum whatever I just said up, I loved it.