I guess I found this a little late, but I was wondering if this has been set to music yet because, if not, it should be. If it has, I'd love to hear it.

-The Lost

It is so beautiful ...here i was thinking okay let me skim through this one cause its's 1 in the morning but once I got passed those first lines you had me hooked. It so good, you have such talent. Never give up...on anything
Ayx

really incredible...just for flow purposes maybe the last stanza should be a little longer?..but i love it...
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That was an extremely good poem! You are so talented! Write another soon when your muses drop in!

*tears well up in eyes* That was great! I hope you write some that are just as beautiful as this one!