Beautiful . . . just beautiful . . .

Nice. Really nice. I really liked the ending. The poem captivates you and makes you feel like you yourself is jumping in and nearly drowning. Very sweet. The friend is one very lucky girl.

This poem- it kept captivaited like, like a short story untill the end. were a had the stupidist of grins plastered on my face, only it was more of a smile. Because no one else was there to catch it. The ending is very sweet and while I'm at it I wanted to apolagize for just plain being a ** - that was rude. I just think that When I read your poem "numb" I found it to be , very stereotypical. and it just offended me. I actualy have Nothing against goth people. My friends and I are a bit wierd. We like Punk guys, and wear the drippy mascara when we get away with it, safety pins and arm warmers. But not at the time that I said it. and thats not why I'm apolagizing. I could do this in an email- but I publicaly insulted you and I think I owe you a public apolagy- Personaly I hope I'm forgiven. Bubye.

This is awesome! You ROCK!!

God Bless
Much Love
Later Daze

- Kacie

That was beautiful...tears are rolling down my cheeks