beautiful poem. flowed really nicely, great read. keep writing evaa

luv it! ah yes, unrequited love is a tragety for us whole-hearted lovers. the pain the pain. luve the poem. great job!

P.S. thx for reviewing my story! _

SP

Great storyline, I can truly was an honor just to read!

Aw, poor thing, unrequited love is the most painful thing one can go through. I hope your heart has healed or better yet found someone to truely return your feelings in the years since writing this.

Silv

hi ya! i'm from writersblock. ne ways...
very nicely done. i really like the set up of this poem. the title is what got my attention, and the poem kept a hold of my attention. yea! it's kind of sad but i'm sure almost everyone feels that way at some point so it's easy to identify with. good job
ebony

I've felt this way all too many times. We all have. It's easy to capture these emotions, and I believe you did it rather nicely. Thank you for the constructive advice on my story. I'll make sure to look back over it for revisions.

Really dramatic fic.I like it.