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| Jill Elyse 2002-01-15 ch 1,  | abuseThe images in this poem were very vivid. I liked it a lot! |
| PadmeSkywalker 2001-09-03 ch 1, | abusewow...very moving, very well written |
| val 2001-07-05 ch 1, anon. | abusenice work! |
| obi's girl 2001-05-28 ch 1, | abuseLove this. Hey, write more. I miss your work. Make me feel inspired! |
| al'Laine Aranielle id Larq 2000-10-16 ch 1, | abuseA nice, almost excellent read, especially in a day where clouds deny the sun its light. Keep up the good work. |
| ISpellWierdWrong 2000-08-17 ch 1, | abuseExcellent read! I really liked this poem...every line has a million meanings...it's really good! By the way! Thanks for the reviews on my story 'Almost Alone'. I really appreciated the feedback! I don't have your e-mail, so I can't send this to you personally, but I had to say thanks! |
| SaturnOolaa 2000-07-27 ch 1, | abuse......Spooky. |
| RouxBot Hilarmy 2000-07-09 ch 1, | abusespelling problems: steak = stake...voiced = voices... but aside from that, i adore this. very good. |
| Christie Rushenberg * Theed 2000-07-05 ch 1, | abuseOkay, well, I'm sorry that you didn't get it. I've noticed that through history, leaders who become corrupt and unjust manipulate the system to get to power, then they abuse it, and they don't care what's for the good of the people. Once the leader is in power, the people usually fight among themselves instead of addressing the problem. Sorry if I wasn't very good at explaining. It's just the way I write. |
| Heather Goldbug 2000-07-05 ch 1, | abuseHuh? I don't really get it...who? What? Where? Good, although I need to understand more parts of it. |