That was so cool! I hope you continue this story now that you've finished that fabulous story Tailsman Trouble.
Do continue this is as good as your other ones!

Oooh! Another great chapter! Can't wait for the next. I really like your characters. They're so kick-butt and original. ^-^ But just one thing.....how about another female character?

Wow! Fantastic story. I only got about half through it, because I'm really sleepy. I'll finish it up later. Just wanted to toss in my two cents. I think it's really good. Keep writing!

Snickers!!! Why didn't you /tell/ me you'd continued this baby?! I love it~! I really like what you've done with Kit and Batty, and Trey is a very nice addition to the team, if ya get what I mean ^_~ He reminds me of fishie, and probably with good cause. Anyways, I liked how you switched the first chapter around a bit, and the next two are also good, only one little slip that I notice and iiiit's right about chapter two I think, you say Andy's parents are Ben and Jamie but then later on Jamie's married to Shane. Now unless Jamie's doin a lil something behind Shane's back I think you need to tweak that, but it's the only mistake I noticed. Nice work!

that's great! i've always wanted to read this kinda of story w/ werewolves and vampires(and fish ppl!) in it. write more! it's a cool concept...i like it :)

Absolutely AMAZING! One of the best things I've read in a long time! PLEASE finish this, it's incredibly promising! I LOVE it!