| Reviews for Short Story 2 |
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First-Chair-Flute 4/30/04 . chapter 1um thats all, just um God luvs ya go 2 him he luvs u repent of sin he luvs u u know he does with all his heart so ask him in and never part yu'll go 2 heaven and see him there welcomeing u in ask him in, believe that Jesus died 4 u and yu'll live 4 ever, in heaven go 2 the Lord he'll always luv u no matter wat u do no matter wat uve done go 2 him repent all sin, (any) accept him into ur heart and u will never part he luvs u, now luv hm in return Jesus really did die 4 u, he really did rise from the dead he really is the perfect and final sacrifice 4 sin, if u repent |
Margaret Lane 9/3/01 . chapter 1Excellent story. I really like it. You're a wondeful writer. |
mandy 9/3/01 . chapter 1 That was a really good story.:) |