I loved ur second ending best. This story was great.

awesome fic XD

Woot alternate ending all the way.. Great story and great to read!

holy **.. this story was sickingly wicked, twisted and creepy. I LOVED IT! Plus the second ending was definitly the best ending. I'm sick of crappy happy endings. This story was very creative. I wish my mind worked like that. Good Job

Whot, nice ending. I like the alternate ... it's ... sweeter *evil grin*

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9th Chapter! I realy like this!

Very nice! This is the first story I've read since I've joined FictionPress and I really liked it. You had great characters with small insight on each that fit the story nicely, an extremley original plot that kept my interest, and, my personal favorite part, you had a great villian that definintley past my bad ** expectations! The only thing that I would suggest is that you might want to add an introduction or prologue of some sort, you don't really have to. But it would give the story a better sense of beginning. But, like I said, you really don't need to. Again, great story. Can't wait till I see your works in the box office!

See ya when I see ya! Bye!

love it!!

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Lillian. Lillian is messing with the wrong person. This story keeps getting more interesting.

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Poor Lillian. I fely sorry for her.

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Great chapter. I wish I could write like you. I think Lillian is cool.

Oh, I remember reading the first four or so chapters of this ages ago! I absolutely loved it, and then my internet was down for ages and I couldn't remember the title at all. I prefer the alternate ending ( for the deliciously evil Lilli) but it's still a beautifully written story whichever ending is used.

I hope there will be romance between Eve and Vic... if they live...

Poor girl of course it is entirely possible that Damien will take her and then destroy her... This so reminds me of demon seed by Dean Koontz and then especially the audiobook the voice really sounds good for Damien

WOW this was Lecterish poor mother and daughter so now he is meddling with her mind as well. But surely the kid isn't all dark... Hope she gets a new boyfriend that will help I guess...