That was an awesome poem, you really have talent.

Yup, if my parents were like that, I would have ended up like the girl in your story.. Instead, they're not nearly so bad.. *sighs sadly* it's a horrible thing when loved ones won't let a person be who they really are...

I loved it... well, you get it. it sent chills down my spine at the end... it was a good poem

wow! this is so great! it describes me and my parents perfectly! wow, i luv it! keep writing!

this is really sad. but beautifully written.

Hey again

very sweet, I love it. Very touching.

i love this poem... i feel like i can relate to the girl so much... great job...