Pretty awesome. Definitely deserved the A it got.

i can see why you got a good grade on this; it's great! i love the title and how those words are repeated throughout the piece.

dude... thats some good crap!... no joke... your stuff is awsome!

A very good peom, as your teacher obviously told you, very deserving of the A grade. I don't know about your arrogance though, I'd probably give that an A as well

To everything, turn, turn, turn. There is a season, turn, turn, turn...Oh! Man, I was just getting into that song and along comes this uptight Puritan screaming about hellfire and brimstone.

Well, all I can say is that EVERYONE has their own cross to bear. I drag that bad boy all over the place with me. Hell is, in fact, nigh. Just look around...

wow...that's amazing. I can see why you got an A.

You've got something of a religious theme going, haven't you? I liked the part about 'hugging it to you like a worn out toy'. Comparing Hell to warm comforting things is interesting.

it was okay, not as dark as i thought but pretty good,

Your style of writing is tight and structured, and is good I must say. Keep on writing and best of luck!

Luna