I LOVE THIS! It is amazing! So beautiful, and pretty! I love it!

This was nice.

I think it's a very beautiful poem. Not my favorite, but beautiful and well written nonetheless.

Finnaly some poem thats not depressing, I read most of you depressing ones, and this one was a relief, no matter how sily it is.
You may have noticed me reviewing alot of your stories, and I want to apoligise if I seem to bash your opinion every chance I get.

*claps* Nice, happy poem! I know what you mean, everyone here writes depressing poems. i do to, when the world backs me into a corner (which its been doing a lot lately) but I have some poems you might like to read...if you hvave some spare time, would you,pretty please?

"Snagging bark keepers?" Eh? Also, I'm not sure about the grammer in that sentence.
The last two lines contradict each other. You can't qualify "forever" with "until such-and-such," because that's not forever.

This is really beautiful. Congratulations. I tried to do a peom of a tree once but didn't turn out nearly as good as this.

"Beautiful, green women of the woods..."

Interesting imagery. You combine the "greeness" of life for these leaves with the turn of the seasons and regeneration...which is, to a certain degree, what being a woman of the woods is REALLY all about, isn't it?

Snagging bark keepers and their lovers, the green women of the woods. Their snowy dance remians a secret of the winter.

Wow, that's a neat poem! I'm impressed! I'm glad I'm not the only one who sometimes writes really small short poems... :)