WOW... I really like that, it so aptly describes those feelings of hurt, betrayal and anger one goes through after being let down... Brilliant... I really do think that it is a very well written poem. :D

I know what you mean... I always try to think before i say something. Though when i'm sick i have really poor judgment on somethings i say, i don't know why, i guess because i'm sick... what ever... BYE BYE!

..I liked it. You expressed a lot in short phrases, and that's cool. I like what you're saying, too..Some people should definitely watch what words they use..Some typos in there, but that's ok, still a good poem.
btw, thanks for the loverly review! =o)
~me (OneMileAway/IUsedToHaveAName)

Yes, words are very powerful aren't they, exactly why I write poetry, unfortunatly they people I write them to never read them. Damn... Great job

I liked the poem. Alyson Grant @)--

Hey its very awsome and your poem on words is great i just dont know what else to say well chat with ya soon

I love all your stuff! Makes me wish that I could rhyme! It is a pleasure to review all of your work and I look forward to reading more!

Wow, a very nice poem. A definetely nice theme, words are so powerful - both in your poem, but also in real life. Nicely done!

me likes. it's good, you convey powerful emotion, a task not easily done with style and grace, but you, my friend, have done it. :) nice job.

There is a phrase that says "Anything that doesn't kill you makes you stronger" I highly disagree with that, but it's what came to mind when reading this. People are very insensitive and that makes me mad a lot of the time, but I guess there are people who are just as mean to them as they are to you. It's a never ending pattern...

Nice work, keep it up.

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