I really liked this story, you have a great style, and I love the poem (I know it isn't yours) could you tell me where it's from please?

oo wow...this is so great. its soo sad but i luv the hopeful endin. n even tho u didnt write most of the poem i just thought id say that i realli like that 2. its a realli awesome stori.

Awww sweetie that's a great story, but then all of yours are. I know you won't read this for awhile cause your in basic, but that doesn't matter. Email me sometime I miss ya babe!

I absolutely loved your story! It's so true to how life and society is today. I suppose it is a tragic thing, and we shouldn't get too caught up in our own lives that we forget about these situations, but the world isn't perfect and at least we're doing something about it.

Tsk. You and your angstful moments. Makes all other angst look like bright sunny walks in the part with the cute little animals and flowers of sneezing. Tsk. You're just too good at what you do, ya know? Keep it up, in any case. ^_^ (For those of you who think the 'sunny' is cheerful, Know that the sun is *vastly* over-rated.)

Amazing. It is so easy to get wrapped up in the bad and forget about the good that evens it all out. Maybe there really is hope...(I 'specially liked the poem running through the story. It gave it a nice touch!) Anywayz, it all comes down to the fact that this stroy kicks **. More power to the optomistic people! Mwhahaha!...