Wonderful piece. The inconstant rhyme sceme really added to the feeling of confusion of it all, but at the end it seemed to have more of a pattern, offering reassurance. Perfect...

Loved it!

I liked it better than some 911 songs cuz it gives a ray of hope at the end.

It's such a terrible time for America. But your right, somehow it will get better.

The lines:

Plummeting

down through the skies,

Silently

before our eyes

Were really good. But sorry, after that it was terrible. It had no rhythm...try not to use such big words. There is hope for it if you try to fix it up.