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| Ady 2001-09-15 ch 1,  | abuseWonderful piece. The inconstant rhyme sceme really added to the feeling of confusion of it all, but at the end it seemed to have more of a pattern, offering reassurance. Perfect... |
| ArmyBrat1 2001-09-15 ch 1, | abuseLoved it! |
| laureli 2001-09-14 ch 1, | abuseI liked it better than some 911 songs cuz it gives a ray of hope at the end. |
| empty account 2001-09-13 ch 1, | abuseIt's such a terrible time for America. But your right, somehow it will get better. |
| Scarlett L. Beckett 2001-09-12 ch 1, | abuseThe lines: Plummeting down through the skies, Silently before our eyes Were really good. But sorry, after that it was terrible. It had no rhythm...try not to use such big words. There is hope for it if you try to fix it up. |