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| happycat 2005-05-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh how sweet! What an absolutely charming story. Really a great story to wake up to. Thank you for writing it. |
| krunchbucket 2005-04-17 ch 1,  | abuseDang. Wow oh wow. This is such a... wow, now this is really A story. Definitely one of the best I've read in a while. It's never dull, always moving steadily along. I enjoy how very poignant it is and how it has this heartfelt honesty about it that I can and I beleive most everybody in this country can relate to. You got universally known troubles with self-esteem, popularity issues, high school alienation, love, especially that of first-love and so many raw emotions. Most importantly I see hope in this story, which is hard to find in most of the heavy, angst-driven, woe-is-me stories that deal with high school life. Keep it up, man, seriously. |
| TheAngelofhope 2005-02-20 ch 1, | abuseIt made me smile while reading it. Nothing like that one girl in your life that just makes everything seem better. |
| heresyisforlosers 2005-02-20 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good. Carmen sounds really nice. Is this a true story? It sounds like it could be. |
| Daniel 2004-12-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseMy god that was amazing... if only the same thing would happen with a girl at my school... omygod I just said that aloud |
| slickchick650 2004-11-24 ch 1, | abuseOh wow, that was so amazing! That was so cute and also very cool how much Carmen changed his life around. It's the perfect length and cool! |
| Claire 2004-06-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow... great story. |
| the elf next door 2004-05-30 ch 1, | abuseawesome stuff! |
| Demon King Piccolo 2001-09-16 ch 1, | abuseAmazing fic. |
| Enviroboy 2001-09-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseAwwwwwwwwww! |
| Gloria 2001-09-14 ch 1, | abuse*clap, clap, clap* |
| Fantasy Lover 2001-09-13 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was the most touching...*chokes on tears*...story I've ever read. Are there anymore guys out there like you? Kudos! ^_^ |