Reviews for An exercise in self-pity

anomie 2004-12-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseI wondered what your take on self pity would be, from the outside or from the inside. In many nways you've caught both. There's something going on though; you've caught the narcissism of self-pity but there's plenty of condemnation of self-pity there too. It's great, I really like it. I'd have gone for less gentle metaphors: used tampons, cigarette butts and vestigial internal organs but then again I'd have written a crap poem, not a great one. -R (anomie)
God Called In Sick 2003-08-25 ch 1,	abuseawesome poem. exactly how i feel about everything. try to cheer up. i know it's hard but you still gotta try. great job again.
jewelz 2001-09-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseo dear. I feel sorry for whoever thinks they are only worthy of lining dog houses
Susan 2001-09-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseCheer up!- but some nice metaphors. hmm, nail varnish.