This poem really hits me, Blows right into my soul. Lately that's how a lot of my friends and I are...

I'm not sure if I like the title...it seems like it has nothing to do with the poem. I know there is that line with it in it, but it seems...I don't know.

Again, I really liked it.

-Steven,

YAH So?

wow... this one has some... what do you call it... heightening magnitude. i have to say that you write really intense... _

"I try to gain friendship through compassion"- great line, very true oftentimes, many times in life, we try and try and try to be nice to people and offer our love to them, yet they are blind to that.

"I'm falling apart in front of you"- another thing i can relate to, sometime emotions being shown in front of people just goes to show how passionate we really are about certain things in life.

how sad...;_;

*smacks farf* stop writing now! youre too good!

very good! sounds a lot like some of the songs I wrote in my early days.

I reckon we should meet... you got MSN? my e-mail address is in my profile.

Hey, good lyrics. A lot of emotions in that one. Very well written.

wow...just wow...are you sure you're not like Aaron Lewis or something pretending to be Ian Mckay lol :) ?

I love that last line. *grin* Yeah, good angst makes me happy. I'm weird, but you knew that already._ Nice job, Ian. powerful stuff.

Tres bien! I wont start the French thing again cos even though I've just come back from France, I still have no clue how to speak it...your work is always great so just promise me you'll keep getting better :) not that getting better would be easy cos you're already so good.

This song shows so much emotion. It really feels as if the writer is scremaning it into yur head when u read it. I love it.

powerful- you've obviously grown as an artist through your songs... great imagery, true emotions... very meaningful, and you expressed it in such a way that not only can we tell that it means a lot to you, but it draws us in too and it becomes meaningful to us

in parts i can relate this song alot to my lifes current situation. Very well written probably my favorite of your songs now :)

Wow.. this is such a cool song.. I see Staind performing it. heh.. (thats a compliment btw)