good poem. some does not make sense, such as the last two lines. how can the dead keep their memory? you say, "for all shall keep their memory, THEM, and you, and me"? otherwise nice

*gently wipes away a tear trickling from eye* That was beautiful, and I cannot express my agreement entirely. I commend you for this piece, and more power to you. This is very touching, and I must say that I have the same thoughts as far as mourning the loss, but not dwelling 'pon death. Keep up the fantastic work, and have a nice day. ;DD