Reviews for Not Goldilocks and the Three Bears

Pigo 2007-11-02 ch 1,	abuseNice story, I liked the concept of it all and the characters were really interesting. Everything was good but I didn't like the fact you wrote the moral, don't know why, just didn't liked it. But don't mind me, great one!
meitnerium 2006-07-24 ch 1,	abuselol, i loved this, and your name. Dante has got to be the coolest name ever...after Field. I would name a kid that if I had or wanted kids...maybe I'll name someone else's kid that...anyway, this was good. I don't care what you pick, just write more!
Panchromatic 2004-06-07 ch 1,	abuseHAHAH this is frickin awesome!! hm.
Somebody That You Don't Kno... 2001-09-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseI read this story and thought that it was written well, but kind of messed up. But I guess that was intended, I mean, bears don't talk, but fish can fly. The monkey was cool.
Mysti-n 2001-09-20 ch 1,	abuseHilarious. I think your right about cause and effect and this story is a good way to teach it.