WOW... just... WOW! Epic... I have convinced my fanfic buddy to read this... and I'm glad I have :) Few errors/typos etc... but nothing too annoying. Most of the time. Hoping there's more! But two years is a long time to not update... *pouts* The final smut... where there is no torture/bondage/etc. was really beautiful :) LOVELOVELOVE

THIS STORY IS AMAZING!! IT'S THE BEST ONE I'VE FOUND YET, AND I SPEND AN HOUR EVERY DAY READING DIFFERENT STORIES!! YOU HAVE A TRUE TALENT!!

I love the way the story is set up! I never get bored of this story, like I often do of others. You are brilliant, and it clearly shows in this ingenious piece of work. Bravo!!

This is an awesome story! I read every chapter over the last few days and I'm sad that you haven't updated in two years. I hope everything's alright and that you just haven't had time too. I can't wait for more chapters of Divinitas! Update as soon as you can.

First off, this story is amazing. Normally, I don't read stories that are rated M or have yaoi, but my friend highly recommended this and after the first chapter I couldn't stay away.
Second, I can't believe that you haven't updated in 2 years! you are denying people the gift of a wonderful story! (Albeit twisted and violent.XD But that is why we love it.) I have read the other two chapters on your website (for anyone who doesn't know about those, they have to read them!) and I must say that is perhaps the biggest cliff hanger I have EVER read, and that is saying something. One of my best friends is an amazing writer and she is the Queen of Cliff Hangers, now I think she has some competition. Any way, you need to continue this! I won't say anything about what happens, for fear of spoiling the story for those who have not read it (because I know these get posted on the site), but you cannot leave Phoenix like that. He will be stuck forever like that, not truly knowing WHO he is. So I implore you, please continue writing! For the sake of Phoenix and everyone else who reads your story! (I know I'm getting a bit irrational, but hey, if it works I don't mind.=])

oh my god
that's all i can say right now
this is just... brilliant and sick and so so twisted...
i think that i'll have to re-read it though - i read it so fast - in 1 day!- that i forgot most of the beginning...
i can only hope there is more...
i have also checked your website, and some of the artwork and fanfart is just amazing. i'll be checking for more in the future...
also - will there be any more to this story? if there is i cant wait... and if there isn't... write a sequel!
thankz - this story made my ay and i'm going to add you to favourites right now!

Umm...wow. It's three o'clock in the morning my time which makes sense because I just read this story in one go. It is very, very good. Violent, bloody, but good. (And honestly, you have a warning every chapter so the violence is hardly unexpected) I'm enjoying your characters and the way the plot is spaced out. Nice job, I can't wait to read more.

OMG OMG I lost your story 4 years ago and I NEVER forgot of it. I LOVE YOU!

Me again, I just realized you have 2 chapters posted on your divinitas site that hasn't been posted here yet (or ever). And OH MY GOD. I can't believe you haven't continued after leaving such a cliffhanger. I'm like... wow... speechless at what I read last. Gosh, I really wish you'd continue on with updates. I really want to find out more!!

Oh, and for the readers and reviewers, if you don't know - on the divinitas site there's a chapter 73 and 74 (def. worth to read).

Wow... I just advertised on your own review for your story chapters. Weird. Oh well. Anyway... even though I'm sure you get plenty of emails. I'm seriously considering emailing you (and hopefully you'll reply then). Cuz I just want at least a small glimmer of hope that you might, might, possibly update in the near future (... like now lol).

Ok, done now. Great story. And great twist.

-eVil uNicorns-

hm... WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?! TWO FREAKING YEARS?! God, I'm seriously hating myself for getting so addicted to your story, because I want more, more, and MORE!! :) Are you dead perhaps? Or just... busy? Writers block, something?! Please please, please tell me that you haven't given up on continuing this, cause I'd so hate you.

Seriously.

Now, on another note. I love Phoenix (which I'm sure almost everyone does). I have trouble liking Aether, cuz the way he treats Phoenix is a bit much for my tastes, but I still continued on (though I did have a lot of hate feelings toward Aether, and cried once). But yeah. Something that totally sucks is that I really want to know what happened between them all. Something had to have happened, because all four of the elemental gods (I think that's what they're called), somehow they had to have died. Because they're immortal right now right? And we know in the present/future they're rencarnations of the ones from before. The only way that could be possible is if something happened to them before, in the past. I guess. I don't know, I may be wrong. But I do have an inkling that Deus has something to do with it. I doubt we've seen the last of him, and there's got to be something that happens that causes Aether to lose Phoenix (and the others, though he probably doesn't really care about them).

Now, on to the present/future. I actually like it more, mainly since the tortue isn't as... ok, so maybe the torture is still pretty extreme. I guess, I like it more since I started out reading that first. I'm really curious as to whats going to happen once you go back to that (if you ever do). I know you left off with Phoenix being strung up(similar to the past when he's there for 37 days), so I'm wondering if Aether is planning on keeping him there longer? Forever? I sincerely hope not. I really don't understand why he did that, it wasn't his fault that Gryphs attacked him. And he was angry with Aether, so he should be used to Phoenix trying to fight him (I guess that might be why he's mad at him). A part of me hopes that he's just worried for him... maybe. I dunno, that sounds unlikely. Maybe He's just angry at something Phoenix did in the past and this sort of set him off in a way (like the time Ash and Phoenix kissed).

There's moments to me that it seems like Aether loves Phoenix, and its not just an obsession (but I'm probably wrong, cuz backing that theory up his hard to do). I guess I think Aether doesn't realize what love is, and so he does these extreme things and he blocks out words like 'I hate you' etc etc, that Phoenix tells him, and pretends it doesn't bother him. But I think it does, cuz maybe he really does love him. Oh, and also, onto the past thing again. I think that maybe whatever did happen to Phoenix not only angered Aether, but also hurt him, and that's why in the present/future he's changed his ways in keeping Phoenix with him, and his always. I mean, he did that in the past too... but it just seems a tiny bit different in the present/future.

Ok, I don't even know what I'm rambling about. You might not actually read this (hopefully you will though, cuz I really want an answer on if your continuing anytime soon). But anyway, great story. I'm so in love with it that I fear I may be a machosist lol. You've really written this well, and I think you should try to publish an actual manga perhaps? Or maybe just a really long book :) both would be awesome. Also, this is the longest review I've ever written (and that's probably cuz you have so many chapters so I have more to say).

Update?

-eVil uNicorns-

hey i just recently found your story on fictionpress. it been a while since you last updated and I really hope you continue to write this story. you definitely have an interesting plot and well developed characters. =]

The story so far is great... but the summary in the end just begged for a review. What a laugh! Hahah XD

This story was recommended to me by a friend, who's suggestions I take seriously. So when I saw the last time you updated and the number of chapters I assumed it was finished. I wouldn't have read it of I realized it wasn't before hand I'm sure. However that would have been a very sad thing for this story is good, has sort of an addicting quality about it. It deffinetly incoumposes "love and hate walk a thin line" I wish you would finish it though for now I simply must know the rest of the Gods stories.

Whats next, whats next.

I was wondering when you're going to update?

I ** love this story. Honestly, honestly.
I bow down to your awesomeness. :D

Please update, seriously. I'll even give you a puppy!

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Also, for any readers reading the reviews (alliteration!) there are a couple more chapters on the Divinitas website.