Your word use is VERY powerful. It draws the reader into the poem (Which is the goal for us all). You did a great job with this one. From beginning to end it flows nicely and ends powerfully. Nice!

how wonderfully angry! reminds me of my poem 'think of me' which deals with similar themes...*subtle plea for review for that one :P* but anyway, your poem.

"And not a word could I write

Merely heart-broke, wailing "why?""

they're a brillant pair of lines, evocative of true pain...I just broke up, and i've yet to be able to write directly about it cos its too close...is this the same kind of thing?

anyways, i really like it.

completly... wonderfull. it tears at your heart like a good tearjercker. I guess it's the usual cliche it made me laugh, cry, and scowl

i like the rhyme here a lot. pretty, very classic.

ps- thankyouthankyouthankyou for actually reading and reviewing dreamcatcher. i like it, but nobody else ever seems to...

Argh! I can never make the poem rhyme without being obvious that I was trying to way too hard! You are able to keep such flow and still rhyme. Tis not fair!

nostolgia...floods my head...flashbacks...no no no yes yes no...

ahh ah ahhhhhhhh

*eats easter chocolate*

im okay now.

very nice.

i think my favourite ones are the random things and mankinds birth.

your a damn good poet

kai