This poem means a lot to me. It's so strong. You are a very gifted writer.

Powerful imagery! I'm astounded at the power of this poem to affect emotions in a few short lines. Absolutely great...keep up the good work!

Wow.so true.You have a poem thing for every scenario dont you?...*adds to author to favorites*

That was really good. Kind of short, but it doesn't matter. It's really good. I like how you have the blood replacing the tears, that's how I feel when I cut.

THATS REALLY GREAT! I like that a lot, a lot! LOL! Please R/and R!

And Always,
Minnie

You know I never thought of cutting that way... but it fits.
I'm one of those people that never cries. Ever. The last time I cried was when my Dad died. I just don't cry. When it hurts, I don't cry, I hold it inside. I don't want to, I just CAN'T cry.
Perhaps cutting is my crying.

The cuts bleed tears, because eyes cry weakness. The problem is, after a while, you forget how to cry... and weakness is good sometimes

Succinct and sickeningly descriptive. I also choked with laughter when I read Tiefling's review...heh heh...fuzzy little creatures...woah it's late in the evening!

This is absolutely perfect.
So true
So precise description
I guess I should try and find time to read more of your wonderful poetry

THat was perfect, you summed it all up in 3 lines *is speechless*... and you said my writing was good!?!

this is really good!Short but sweet!You may want to add to it though but it works as a stand alone.Good job.

Short...But Deep..

I always love the realy short angsty ones. I have a short angst called girl in blue. I love it. Keep up the good work

That is disturbing, but brilliantly written. You need to get in touch with nature's fuzzy creatures.