So emotional and heartbreaking–or rather spiritbreaking.You are honestly one of my favorite writers.

EVERY FRIKIN SCENARIO is there anything you dont write about?I love your work keep writing.Its all that keeps us going.

Thats sad *hugs* Well written too though... I find the imagery of the feather intersting. It works well as a metaphor. I didn't find this one as amazing as your usual but that's just me... it's still really good! It's just you set your "usual" standard so high!! This seems to me a more minimalist style as if you didn't have much energy to write or couldn't find the words... tom xXx

I know how this goes. I have a wolf without whom I am a piece of the wrong puzzle, if you know what I mean. Your metaphors are wonderful as always, and I like some parts of the short/long lines. There are a few places where I found the flow a bit jerky, but I could be reading it incorrectly. Beautiful piece, as always, and `I have a small request. I have a website for my art from school and I have a section for gift art. Could I put up your picture in my gift art section? (your personal information **email, name, etc** would be left out and I'd simply use the line you used for the subject of the email you sent me) If you'd rather I not have it up there, just let me know. Once again, wondeful metaphors you've used here, you have a wonderful way with words.

Wow.. again.. wow. this poem is good. DAmn good. I love how you take an aspect of life (or society) and make it so beautiful in your sadness and compassion for those who live with it.
thanks for pouring out your soul to us

I love this.it's beautifully written and full of emotion!Wonderful job!