|Reviews for Opaque Cage|
| donzilla70 11/28/03 . chapter 1
This says so much... with so little.
| Incubabe 7/3/03 . chapter 1
Oh my God!
This is perfect! It's just so true and it reads so well. I love those last two lines; they totally make the poem!
| HarrysBoy 2/11/02 . chapter 1
this is relly good. i can relate sooo much. it hurts so much. i can't take it anymore. Haiku Police suck.
| The Haiku Police 2/8/02 . chapter 1
This is wrong!
| Lori 10/6/01 . chapter 1
You'r not alone, I feel the same way.
| Ellerfru 9/30/01 . chapter 1
this is just too true... luv it!
| LinaDuck 9/29/01 . chapter 1
How sad! I love how you kept the 5-7-5 rule for all the haiku parts. (By the way, your second line of the first verse has 6 syllables, not 7 but that's okay...) Keep writing!
| Ms Goku 9/25/01 . chapter 1
*sigh* And that's the story of my life...very well written and truthfully said.