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| Reviews for Opaque Cage |
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   donzilla70 11/28/03 . chapter 1This says so much... with so little. Good job. Keep writing. |
| Incubabe 7/3/03 . chapter 1 Oh my God! This is perfect! It's just so true and it reads so well. I love those last two lines; they totally make the poem! Diana x |
| HarrysBoy 2/11/02 . chapter 1 this is relly good. i can relate sooo much. it hurts so much. i can't take it anymore. Haiku Police suck. |
| The Haiku Police 2/8/02 . chapter 1 This is wrong! |
| Lori 10/6/01 . chapter 1 You'r not alone, I feel the same way. |
| Ellerfru 9/30/01 . chapter 1 this is just too true... luv it! |
| LinaDuck 9/29/01 . chapter 1 How sad! I love how you kept the 5-7-5 rule for all the haiku parts. (By the way, your second line of the first verse has 6 syllables, not 7 but that's okay...) Keep writing! |
| Ms Goku 9/25/01 . chapter 1 *sigh* And that's the story of my life...very well written and truthfully said. |
