You're very good! I sincerlly enjoyed it, so continue...
Please hurry!

Very good story! The twist of Falen being a girl was one of the most unexpected in any story I've ever read!

Keep writing! I can't wait!

interesting twist with falen being a girl. completely unexpected. i enjoyed it and cant wait for more

hmm... interesting... artist friend kim is often mistaken for a boy... oh uh cool story! i will keep checking back on this one.

Excellent story, please keep writing. This is just an extroidenary