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| LateDawnsAndEarlySunsets 2006-04-17 ch 1,  | abuseYou did a wonderful job with this poem. It is awful that so many people think that it is no big deal when they abort. Babies *are* living humanbeings in the womb, and I see the act of abortion as *murder.*So many mothers could give their children up for adoption if they really are unable to care for them, but I think many mothers choose abortion because they either think "if I don't want it, no one else will" or "if I can't keep it, no one else will." Either way, it's selfish and wrong. |
| Lore of Luna 2006-01-14 ch 1, | abuseThis is a beautiful poem. I'm so sorry that your friend had to go through this. |
| desert-sands 2005-06-09 ch 1, | abusevery nice poem. |
| Sparks Of Steel 2005-05-22 ch 1, | abuseI really like this poem. My favorite part is the "and on my hipbone baby angel wings/are cut clear out." I really like it keep up the good work! |
| Caia Marie 2004-11-16 ch 1, | abuseThat's a really great poem. I can't imagine how any mother could be so heartless, to do that to a child. |
| Katusya Misoka 2004-09-18 ch 1, | abuseThat perfectly echoes my feelings on abortion. The words were perfectly chosen...What else can I say? |
| fRoZeN tIgEr TeArS 2004-07-08 ch 1, | abuseaw! nice poem! |
| Phoebs 2004-06-26 ch 1, | abuseA little reminder for the child that never had a chance... Touching, sweet, and sad... Very emotional. Loved it. |
| cosmic energy 2004-04-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseReally touching poem. Especially considering that I consider myself "pro-choice" Really makes you think twice, which is what I'm assuming you were trying to do. |
| little red line 2004-02-24 ch 1, | abuseDo I need to say much more exept for absolutly postivly wonderful.Keep writing keeps us going. |
| Somnia 2003-12-01 ch 1, | abuseoh oh oh it's so beautiful!! Poor little baby.. But please, don't forget how your friend probably felt. They say that every mother who has an abortion goes through trauma and depression...sounds like she was fooling herself and when she realises fully what she has done it's gona hurt...you ahve to forgive and be there for her you know... I'm adding this to my favorites... Somnia x |
| nolongerinuse 2003-07-08 ch 1, | abuseReally touching. I'm glad you shared this. |
| zephyr20 2002-12-08 ch 1, | abuseGod! Thats so brilliant! So touching... I'm extremely impressed by the way you can convey your emotions through words. |
| Ninth Lady 2002-09-04 ch 1, | abuseThat is so true. A girl I knew did that, and I hated her for it...your poem says it all. ~Ninth Lady~ "The Messiah of Silence" |
| Black Dragon4 2002-05-21 ch 1, | abuseangel wings. that's cute. did you really do it? |