You did a wonderful job with this poem. It is awful that so many people think that it is no big deal when they abort. Babies *are* living humanbeings in the womb, and I see the act of abortion as *murder.*So many mothers could give their children up for adoption if they really are unable to care for them, but I think many mothers choose abortion because they either think "if I don't want it, no one else will" or "if I can't keep it, no one else will." Either way, it's selfish and wrong.

This is a beautiful poem. I'm so sorry that your friend had to go through this.

very nice poem.

I really like this poem. My favorite part is the "and on my hipbone baby angel wings/are cut clear out." I really like it keep up the good work!

That's a really great poem. I can't imagine how any mother could be so heartless, to do that to a child.

That perfectly echoes my feelings on abortion. The words were perfectly chosen...What else can I say?

aw! nice poem!

A little reminder for the child that never had a chance...
Touching, sweet, and sad...
Very emotional. Loved it.

Really touching poem. Especially considering that I consider myself "pro-choice" Really makes you think twice, which is what I'm assuming you were trying to do.

Do I need to say much more exept for absolutly postivly wonderful.Keep writing keeps us going.

oh oh oh it's so beautiful!!
Poor little baby..
But please, don't forget how your friend probably felt. They say that every mother who has an abortion goes through trauma and depression...sounds like she was fooling herself and when she realises fully what she has done it's gona hurt...you ahve to forgive and be there for her you know...
I'm adding this to my favorites...
Somnia x

Really touching. I'm glad you shared this.

God! Thats so brilliant! So touching... I'm extremely impressed by the way you can convey your emotions through words.

That is so true. A girl I knew did that, and I hated her for it...your poem says it all.


~Ninth Lady~ "The Messiah of Silence"

angel wings. that's cute. did you really do it?