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Reviews For: Close but not Quite: A Study of Frogs and Logs - Reviews: Page 1 of 2
Papertazuna 2004-10-12 . chapter 1
wow, that is so creative and funny i almost died! I understand you completely. Sometimes it feels that way, but really, you can get to that log if you want. You've just got to keep on trying. If you never give up, you'll get there eventually. The frog won't just hop to that log till he dies. somewhere along the way he has to rest and get that energy back, maybe drink some pond scum and snap up a fly as he goes.
Phoebs 2004-06-26 . chapter 1
The most non-angsty poem from you I've read so far. Wow...that really sucks!
Rachel 2004-06-24 . chapter 1
Oh, this is funny. Made me laugh. Very good!
little red line 2004-02-24 . chapter 1
oh my god...Im a frog.DAMN IT I KNEW IT WAS TRUE!...I just thought of Emily Dickensen's (sp?)'To be public like a frog"...hmm I dont know.But the sad thing is this is...yet again true.Keep writing.It keeps us going.
Somnia 2003-12-01 . chapter 1
think I'm a frog at the moment too...
you shouldn't listen to maths though *shudders* it's evil...so glad i gave it up.
Foxsong 2002-07-24 . chapter 1
*giggles* Um... that's almost funny, but not at the same time. Universal truths and all that. Right. Very nice use of rhythm, by the way.
Bitterscarlet 2001-12-20 . chapter 1
But we all know frogs go *BOOM* la-di-da-di-dah
*BOOM* la-di-da-di-dah
*BOOM* la-di-da-di-dah
We all know frogs go *BOOM* la-di-da-di-dah!
*coughs*
Sorry.
some one 2001-12-17 . chapter 1
ohhhh now i know what is wrong with me. thanx for pointing that out. i'm that puny little green thing too. trying to reach everyone elses log. the only why out is to have a mind of my own. which i wil never have. but at least i now i know what is wrong
scully 2001-12-06 . chapter 1
Lol...god dammed mathimatical fact. I am a frog...yes, yes I am. I applaud you for pointing it out, and making it fit with human being as well, great metaphor.
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ooga booga 2001-12-05 . chapter 1
Humor? You do humor too??
Wow, I liked this one, very cynical with a wonderful word play. :) Love it!
Ragdoll 2001-10-19 . chapter 1
Hehe I forgot how good it was to read your humor stuff. That was quite funny but with an unsetling undertone, a strange but effective combination!!
Kammie 2001-10-11 . chapter 1
That is so cute! he he he I guess I's a frog too . . .
LostFairy24 2001-10-07 . chapter 1
I loved this. I thought it was true and funny!
NightlySpooner 2001-10-01 . chapter 1
Woo! I'm eventually gonna die! Thanks for reminding me! Beans, anyone?
Lightbulby 2001-09-26 . chapter 1
COOL! I'm a frog! :p Funny poem.
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