Very... musical! I enjoyed it. It was very fast paced with only 5 or less words on a line though...

this is really good, music is very powerful, unless it's crap where as then you don;t dance, but still good poem

"The movments of the music" you got a spelling mistake on movments... *movements*. Anyhow; this poem was really cheerful and fun. I liked it a lot... I had actually expected LONG lines describing it but this seems better. The different words you used every time gave it a nice touch. I also liked the repetition you made on " dancing". Lol. Nice work!:)

Oh! Wonderful! I love poetry and I love music so this is great! Excellent piece!


~*~AbunaiChikara

*claps* Really great! I loved that! Made me feel like getting up and jumping around...hee hee. *gets up and jumps around*

i love baroque music and this poem reminds me of the couterpoint to one i heard the other day.nice.

~Nat~

*dances around the room* cool poem! Such a great description of a dance! m I can just see the people moving around: "bodies copy/the movements of the music"
anyway, great poem! ^_^

Wonderfully written outstanding wording it was as if I was watching someone dance It described pure joy of dance