 ZenithYoda 2004-02-27 . chapter 1My fav so far. Only thing is that with free verse poems, Microsoft Word usually makes the next line capital when you don't want it to be.
I just think it would be better if only he begining of the sentence and "I" is capitalized. It gives them more strenght. The way you have it now, all the lines have the same power. you don't want that.
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