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ZenithYoda 2004-02-27 . chapter 1
My fav so far. Only thing is that with free verse poems, Microsoft Word usually makes the next line capital when you don't want it to be.
I just think it would be better if only he begining of the sentence and "I" is capitalized. It gives them more strenght. The way you have it now, all the lines have the same power. you don't want that.
9.75/10
Macy 2002-04-21 . chapter 1
things can never stay bad forever no matter how much it feels that way. very inspirational in a way. kudos to you
Dragonmaster1 2001-09-27 . chapter 1
::claps:: Great job! Remember, things do get better eventually, sometimes it just takes a while to get there.
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