Really good... write more

Good stuff. No constructive criticism here, no need for it. Cute little poems you did in class outta boredom.
9/10 (Just for fun a cuteness factor)

although our S.S. teacher has never put me in a poetic frenzy this are very good keep it up.

kewl

Great once again! You're on a roll with these poems pal. I liked the third one the best.