Lesbian love? O= Just kidding. This one is pretty cute. Not too special, but it's squeezable and I like it.

I'm kinda picky at things like this, but if you use rhyme use it throughout. Don't start and then not anymore, it takes away for the flow of the piece. Great poem, but needs some work.
8.3/10

lol. No problem buddy! Great job, THIS one's a poem. lol. It is one of your best.