That was neat.

Hmm. I once knew someone like that. I don't really know him anymore...
I liked how simple this was. There wasn't really any "flowery" langauge there to take away from the poem, which was good. The only suggestion I would dare to make is to maybe restructure the lines; it seems like some of them are a little abrupt, and perhaps combining them would make the poem flow a little easier. Nice job.

It's dark. And oddly romantic. I could picture everything that happened...which, in it's own twisted way, was beautiful.

Very nice... I could picure it, always a good thing:)
Please R&R mine_

AAAII! ...that boy... DAMN... he sounds soooooo romantic. Sorry. Soda again...

I liked the expression you show in writing your poems. But then again it shows how sick somebody can be.

This is pretty good. So dark... This one's definitely going on the old favorites list!