This poem is simply astounding. I think this may actually be my favorite peice on this site. great job!

It's a great poem and a painful one at that. But that's what makes it realistic. Good one.

So ** true.You allways know how to put it.I admire you're ability to know what the hell is going on in that talented mind of yours.I dont have that obviously.Keep writing.It keeps us going.

excellent poem, i love the way you wrote it.

very good poem, not quite as good as your others, but still very good!

Wow that was so well written, I can really feel the sense of emptiness. The rhyme scheme with 2 words then a full line is like my poem Rag Doll but of course you pull it off better. It might seem you're in hell sometimes but I can promise you it won't stay that way. "The smoke...

Contains my pains and rises up in twisted strands" that was an especially good bit. As I've said before sad poetry can be beautiful and this is proof.

oh wow... i know this feeling... and theres nothing wrong with depressing poetry! its usually the best, in my opinion, especially poems like this one... incredible.

Very very good. I love poetry but not silly kinds but yours is great.

The world doesn't have to be that dark. It's only in the inside do you feel that way. Depression don't get you no where but hell, only if you let it!!! I know i've been to hell and back! it's not that cool either!!
The poem was a good way to express the way you feel right now anyways and i don't mean to preach, but i've been there and it don't feel very good.