Cool! You've got an awsome story going here. keep up the good work:)

more soon please

souds good, im hooked already

cool!!!!!!!!:)

well in gentle words (a really really boring story)

Well, i have to say good beginning. But you might want to watch the spelling a little more though. You say this is a Prologue? Well? wheres the rest of the story. I have read your Septanic Dueling story and it is written much better that your first story, but everyone must begin somewhere, and it's better to go up than down! :P

TTYL!

wow this is a cool idea! I'll check back now and then to see for more chapters, and I'll try and review each one. I'll read this one over to see if I missed anything but so far it's really good.

Really cool! Please post another chapter soon!

An interesting and well written first fic, especially if English is not your first language. I suspect your choice of subject will lead to a fairly small audience, but don't be disheartened!