Another one of my favorites; your writing is very original and you use words that flow perfectly.

I am in love with your poetry, and I don't say that lightly.

This is really good. I'm not a religious person, I haven't been to church in almost two years but I do agree with what you're saying.

Wow. That was good, really, really good. I can see the truth behind this. Even as a Christian, I realize that it's not about the religion itself. Religion will not stand the test of time, and religion most definitely has its faults. Because it's not about religion, but about your relationship with God on a whole different level. This was a really thought-provoking piece. Bravo.

there isnt any words to describe how truthful that poem is. its wonderfully writting, i just love it.

This is truly a great poem, It completely represents my own views on religion. Really great writing.
lozfairy x

and the Christian sighes and says,
I know. Sometimes I wonder if today's church is any better then the pharasiees of old (heh, probably worse)
Mechanically, very well written. I like the fact its written in first person; it enables me to see myself as the "I" in this poem, thus understanding your position better.

Oh my god that was amazing...i am speechless...I feel exactly the same way! Religion is so overbearing, so fake nowadays, all about money and the image your present, but thats now what god and jesus or any religion is trying to tell us! Thank you so much for a breath of fresh air to let me know i'm not the only one!

whoa. that's interesting.

So true... Sometimes a society outgrows a religion. Ours is in the early phases.

The ryming sounded really good. And I loved the little bit of repetism you had. This is really, really good.

wow... MY POETRY SUCKS COMPARED TO YOURS! I love it, the moral, the inconsistent rhyming, your use of churchy objects, also your repetition added to the quality of your poem.

KEEP IT UP!

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That was extremely good. And that's how I feel at times...

wow..thats good...i'm wiccan and i completely understand

Fantastic. It represents my views on Christianity quite well.