I liked this story, but it was too long. This Aura thing is interesting, very original idea. Keep up the good work!

REaly grreat story you wrote! It is very interesting and intriguing. please update very soon please!

Your story is really good! Update!

Oh, darn, there are only two chapters?! This is getting quite interesting - smoother flow, more tidbits of information . . . and a wonderful ending to this part. I honestly hadn't thought of his parents and what they might think until then (gee, guess I'm kinda callous). ^_~
Let's see, there were a couple of things I noticed that I'm only going to point out for aesthetics. Tari surprised me when she said she didn't know how to cook - she's out wandering alone, isn't she? Kasha also surprised me, that she was willing to keep her contract with the two even after seeing their Auras.
Nitpicky things, I know. I absolutely loved how Gemini's dreams are evolving, and the idea that those with Black had all been killed - what's his father's story?
I do hope you plan to update this! I can see that it's really old, but like I said, it's really interesting too. ^_^
ja ne,
LoK

Hello, Songwind! ^_^
My goodness . . . LONG chapter! That's okay though. I printed it out so I could read it at my leisure - I was just taken off-guard. Most authors on this site put up chapters that are too short. ^_~
Very interesting premise you've got going on here. Personally, I like stories that have the whole color-coded something or other, and those with things like auras and magical powers. Much fun. I also enjoyed the little bit of culture you were able to slip so easily into your writing, from the speech patterns to the kissing of the coin for luck - that was well done. The only thing that sort of struck me as I was reading is that things move VERY fast in your story. It might work at your behest to slow down a little.
Last thought - loved the swordfight between Gemini and Zano. hehehe That, and killer last lines.
I'll be back to read the next chapter when I get the chance!
ja ne,
LoK
P.S. Thank you very much for your review!

WRITE CHAPTER 3!

This is an wonderful story.. I really hope you update this one more. plz do it soon...

wow. This is really good!!

wow. i would like you to know that i have been searching for good fantasy for quite a while now, and i must say your story is what i've been in need of. take care in writing the rest of your story- and do it soon! i'll be checking back with you in due time. wonderful job

Whoa! May I say, you are the master, indeed you are! A DAMN good story, very unique and definitely well-written! The idea of the Auras is very good! (reminds me a bit of the Seven Towers, but YOUR story is definitely more captivating!) I hope you update soon! Bravo, bravo!

Wow, this story is really great. I just wish that there was more of it to read. Are you going to continue it, or is this where it ends?

I really liked this! It sounds very interesting! Tell me whne you get an update, k?
Later!

that was fantastic! u really are a very talented writer. please carry on!

This is excellent! Keep writing! I can't wait to read the rest.

Lex-chan
AKA
Kelly Brenner

This story is totally amazing! I love it! Please write more. ^_^