Lol, cliche sibling rivalry with a twist. I like it. It's the sort of story that you can only smirk and giggle at - not that that is at all a bad thing.

lol. i liked it. It was kinda short...but short stories are supposed to be short. That's why they're called "short" stories. lol. anyway, i thought it was a cute idea. At first, I figured the boy was an elf or wizard in the shape of a boy. i didn't think it would be her brother. lol. anyway, nice job.