Do I even need to say?I'll do it anyways.WONDERFUL!

It's a very powerful poem indeed. Beautifully written. I think I'm adding it to my favorite stories list.

I love all of your metafores even though I don't always understand them. They all kind of mean something to me. So I was wondering... Who is your Dragon? Is it a guy thay you love or something? Are you teh moth or something else? the phenix?

This was so lyrical. Absolutley mesmerizing. It's so wonderful. The rhyming is semaless and your flow is exquisite. This is going on my favorites list. It is truly beautiful.

Oh, wow... that was really good. I absolutly loved it! I have a dragon, just like that, in my life too...you're really good at this poetry thing...make sure to write more!

*smiles* You're such a special person and don't let anybody tell you otherwise. This poem is like a breeze on a hot day if you know what I mean. *sighes* Thank you so much... The repetition of "sleep dragon sleep" is really relaxing. Actually the whole thing is like a lullaby. It's just beautiful..

this was very well-written and as a fan of fantasy myself, i really enjoyed it.

This is SO well written! You didn't lose the rhythm, even for a second. I liked the theme and the repetition too. I wonder what else you've done.... *goes in search of more*

Your metaphors are intriguing. You have immense talent for poetry!

wow! that is sooo cool!