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Reviews For: Resolution

Darkest Angels 2005-04-16 ch 1,	abuseThis is such an awsome poem!! It describes me well too but i can't cut every day cuz i have open change rooms at school and if my friend noticed all the cuts she would tell. But by about 10am every day i feel like cutting. YOu did a really good job at writting this. If you have a chance could you please review something of mine? thanksMornin Starr
mtmcl 2004-12-06 ch 1,	abuseOh Jesus!Has "cutter" become a new culture or social group?The poem is well written and all, but c'mon! We all face problems. And the more people write things like this, the more you RECRUIT! None the less, I like the poem, conveys a lot of emotion and reasoning.
Phoebs 2004-06-26 ch 1,	abuseIt's a pity that some people really feel this way. Life isn't always good...too bad cutters couldn't find other way to rid of their pain.
little red line 2004-02-24 ch 1,	abuseThis is exactly like everyday of a cutters life.you say you wont do it,** happens,you do it.Im printing this and putting it in my locker.Keep writing it keeps us going.
scarred 2002-12-30 ch 1,	abuseThat was amazing! It is the story of almost everyday of my life. Everything stats out ok like things will get better. Then little thingz start to go wrong and I try to shake them all off, but by the end of the day so many little things have gone wrong and I can't take it so I reach for my escape. (I think you can guess what that it) ((slash slash cut cut)) But I have gone one full week with out cutting and I thinkt aht I might last...
myself 2002-05-14 ch 1,	abuseWOW! love it. that is so so so so so so so so so so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOW
Ever1 2002-02-18 ch 1,	abuseI'm a cutter, this is how i feel. You capture the feeling of the fight against the addiction really well.
Bitterscarlet 2001-12-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseDammit I got cut off in my review of this. I was trying to tell you I was inspired by you and Tominator and your 'Rabbit Hole Poems' and have uploaded my own version. Please don't sue me! I've acknowledged the both of you in an author's note. Just letting you know. (Thanks for the reviews btw!)
Bitterscarlet 2001-12-20 ch 1,	abuselooks at Scarlet Phoenix's review whistles in admiration and disbelief Wow. Was that a review or an epic? I thought I got carried away sometimes... From one Scarlet to another: Keep hoping! Textual diarrhea CAN be cured! While I'm being annoying (Spiffy poem by the way) I just thought I'd let you know I have been 'inspired'
gasoline rainbows 2001-12-12 ch 1,	abusehey, think you very much for reviewing 'Flight of the Phoenix' and 'We Itch' However, I believe you got the wrong idea about 'We Itch'. You see, I was saying out there to the cutters who think that's the only way to go. However, you're asking me for my way proved that you don't belong to that group. I never tried to start a contest with anyone, I never tried to say that cutters play any games. We all play our own games... I'm sorry if I seem to have singled 'you cutters' as you put it, out. I happen to have many friends who are cutters. Pain is sweeter. I know that. I can't tell you what you don't know, because I don't know it either. I can tell you what I do know... after you're experience with the sweet taste of blood and pain... I don't think you are interested in what I was involved in. Once again, I'm sorry if I portrayed 'you cutters' in such a 'we're more messed up than you game' way. Because that isn't what I think. BTW, Resolution has a great feeling of high hopes, false hopes, those hopes starting to crack, shattering, falling, and finally hitting the ground... and then the resolution doesn't matter any more. You have a wonderful way with rhymes and rhythm and words. On another note (yes one whole biiiiig review) The phoenix is not someone who protects me. The phoenix is me, and my wolf is my best friend... someone who shares my pain and anguish. My dragon is a lost soul who just wants to find their way back.
Ragdoll 2001-10-05 ch 1,	abuseI know just what you mean... you think it's a good day and maybe you don't need to cut and then something happens and you don't care anymore. So well written, thankyou. One day neither of us will need to cut.. but for now it gets me through the day.
Empty Eyes 2001-10-02 ch 1,	abuseI see, this and it just spirials, that was me for a long time, but I'm better now. It takes a little, but you will feel, better if you stop even for a week, every now and then though, i think it's a good thing for you. Just, bite your tongue, and grin and bear for a day, good poem however.

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