  Mr. K 2002-11-28 . chapter 1 I love this fic so far! Matori sounds so cool!! |
  Lunar Shinra 2002-10-24 . chapter 6Woo-hoo! Finally an update! And it was really good too!
The whole convo and everything just hinted something really big, causing suspense. So the evil Matori has a soft side after all, eh?
I'll have to update the majik* play asap so that you can update this fic @_@. -rushes off- |
| Lunar Shinra 2002-07-18 . chapter 4 Oooo... I decided to reread it because you're taking so long to update I pratically forgot everything...
Vance from Xeno is cute!! How come Matori lent Kento get away with saying that? Ooo.. this is such a great fic! It reminds me of Xeno with the Ageis gears... UPDATE NOW! OR ELSE! O_O!!! |
 Mei Lin3 2002-01-07 . chapter 1UPDATE UPDATE! |
 Angelgirlie805 2001-12-16 . chapter 5wow what a great storie can't wait till the next chapter yay :) |
 NinjaRage 2001-12-15 . chapter 2I like this chapter!!!I like them all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I like your scetches for this story Strife21!!!!! |
| NinjaRage 2001-12-10 . chapter 1 AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!heh that was a little out of hand what I just did but your story rules so far! |
| Sum Kid 2001-12-05 . chapter 4 really great. cant wait for the next chapter! [gives up...(throws axe and hits some old person...)] |
| Hix 2001-11-19 . chapter 2 MORE CHAPTERS!!! @_@ |
| Hix 2001-11-19 . chapter 2 MORE CHAPTERS!!! @_@ |
| Hix 2001-11-19 . chapter 2 MORE CHAPTERS!!! @_@ |
| Hix 2001-11-19 . chapter 2 MORE CHAPTERS!!! @_@ |
| Hix 2001-11-19 . chapter 2 MORE CHAPTERS!!! @_@ |
| Hix 2001-11-19 . chapter 2 MORE CHAPTERS!!! @_@ |
| Hix 2001-11-19 . chapter 2 MORE CHAPTERS!!! @_@ |
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