you're a weirdo. What is he like a cross-dresser or somrthin'? Jeez, the weird people that are in this world. I hate animals getting hurt so that bwas the only falt other than that I enjoyed it. So yea, by the way on the note of your other stories. Dude, get a life. I'm an easily bored student with nothing better to do, you need a girlfriend or somethin'. Whatever. Anyhow. That's alls me had to say.
Buh bye.

nice...

Uh ... random...

I though the storiy was really sick, esspecially the first paraqgraph. Wha'd ya mean, buy a pros=titute? I really think you should take this wreched storie off line. It really is sick, and random, with no plot.

The sentences were a bit choppy for my taste, and...I didn't really laugh...but, still. Good job anyway.

the poor doggy!

okay. very nice.

Fun, crunchy and disturbing! I love it! (it seemed a bit odd, though... disjointed and compacted at the same time.)

HI!. this was funny I liked it but how did Jerry get his shoes? um maybe the girlfriend gave them to him.

see ya

That roxx and is cool with a K! Check out digw's stories... they roxx!

lol

What kind of classes do you take that you can write what the hell ever you want? Amusing story btw.
Lizz

Very odd. But It made a stranges sort of sense.

Whoa, weird. Really weird. But cool idea! I like it.

That's my kind of humor, good job.