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Kantsu-chan
2008-05-27
ch 1,
abuseyou're a weirdo. What is he like a cross-dresser or somrthin'? Jeez, the weird people that are in this world. I hate animals getting hurt so that bwas the only falt other than that I enjoyed it. So yea, by the way on the note of your other stories. Dude, get a life. I'm an easily bored student with nothing better to do, you need a girlfriend or somethin'. Whatever. Anyhow. That's alls me had to say.
Buh bye.
zenith-kaitou
2006-10-12
ch 1,
abusenice...
Xn-v
2006-09-16
ch 1,
abuseUh ... random...
Climbergurl
2006-08-18
ch 1,
abuseI though the storiy was really sick, esspecially the first paraqgraph. Wha'd ya mean, buy a pros=titute? I really think you should take this wreched storie off line. It really is sick, and random, with no plot.
Rayne
2006-01-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseThe sentences were a bit choppy for my taste, and...I didn't really laugh...but, still. Good job anyway.
tina
2005-11-10
ch 1, anon.
abusethe poor doggy!
Catharine
2005-06-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseokay. very nice.
Anne Ominous
2005-05-11
ch 1,
abuseFun, crunchy and disturbing! I love it! (it seemed a bit odd, though... disjointed and compacted at the same time.)
Rach
2005-03-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseHI!. this was funny I liked it but how did Jerry get his shoes? um maybe the girlfriend gave them to him.

see ya
indexx
2004-11-23
ch 1,
abuseThat roxx and is cool with a K! Check out digw's stories... they roxx!
stressed-teenager
2004-11-04
ch 1,
abuselol
No1LovesLizz
2004-07-28
ch 1,
abuseWhat kind of classes do you take that you can write what the hell ever you want? Amusing story btw.
Lizz
Dartxni
2004-07-01
ch 1,
abuseVery odd. But It made a stranges sort of sense.
blackblade2
2004-06-05
ch 1,
abuseWhoa, weird. Really weird. But cool idea! I like it.
Mockey Laserbeam
2004-06-02
ch 1,
abuseThat's my kind of humor, good job.
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