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| Ainu 2006-09-13 ch 1,  | abuseSo sad. Almost made me cry. T_T |
| C.Blossom 2005-08-26 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was pretty good. :), you're right, who hasn't experienced it?keep on writing. Ja ne,Cherry |
| Axa 2005-08-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseBah, that is about me I tell you me! ;)Nice poem. Very heartfelt. A little ryhme-y at the end, but it dosen't take away from the message. Nice! |
| x0x-Still-Alive-x0x 2004-07-08 ch 1, | abuseThat was a great poem =)*sniffle* I can really relate to this *sigh* Unrequited love :'( ~~*Nid*~~ |
| Lil Lalita 2004-01-17 ch 1, | abuse*sighs* I DO hate unrequited love. Really detailed and true. Me likes! ~Lil Lalita |
| MoonKnight Maiden 2002-05-16 ch 1, | abuseunrequited love! boy doesn't this hit a little close to home...that's just fine; it's proof that ur a wonderful writter! keep up the good work! |
| Emerald Rosepetals 2002-03-03 ch 1, | abuseThis poem is so beautiful, i totally adore it, I think most of us know this feeling well. -Leanne |
| Azrel 2001-12-27 ch 1, | abuseThis poem is FAR from 'crappy.' It's definitely one of the best poems that I've read on unrequited love. ::nods:: |
| Mirai Hope 2001-07-13 ch 1, | abuseIt is NOT 'crappy'!!! In fact, I want to know if I can use it in one of my fanfics. It's SO perfect!!! I may not use every bit of it, demo most of the verses are PERFECT!!! *sighs* It's SO beautiful! ESPECIALLY this part: 'You are here, Here with me, So near, Yet so far' That's what TOTALLY cinched it for me.... absolutely BEAUTIFUL.... *sighs* I don't know WHERE you got the idea it wasn't good, because it's GREAT.... *sighs again* Ah, the tragedy of unrequited love... The person you love more than words thinks of you as nothing more than a friend.... so sad, really...... *sighs* *sniff* Ja ne...... =^@.@^= |
| Matt 2001-06-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey, we're not all bad! But I really like this poem, everyone feels like this. Very good. |
| Children of the Root 2001-02-28 ch 1, | abuseI can definatly relate. It says exactly how I feel half the time. Stupid guy I like has a girlfriend so I can't do anything. |
| Princess Leia 2001-02-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseA bit too cutesy, but something we can all identify with. It was well-written in a naive kind of way. Good luck with the guy. :) |
| Laurie 2000-12-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseI know the feeling well. BUT OH WELL, it will all work out. GREAT POEM!!!! |
| Silent Moon 2000-12-12 ch 1, | abuseAh, unrequited love. Been there, done that. In fact, am there, doing this. I can really identify with it. Keep up the good work. Oh, and please read some of my stuff? Oh-pleae-oh-please-oh please? |
| Guitgrrl 2000-10-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey not bad I think everyone can realte. Doesnt have your usual "touch" but still good |