amazing rhythm and flow. i love it

WoW! I ®eally like this one...the flow is really great and the way the words connect are super! [thankies for your review][!] You are a really good writer...keep up the good stuff!

~Brone

Incredible rhythm and flow. Wonderful message.

Dang, we have so much in common. I, too, can't stand litterbugs. Those lazy, thoughtless, filthy people deserve a good spanking.

*l* I love this. Littering is something I could never stand, and I always bug my friends about it. One day I was rather bored in chem, so I drew a diagram of hell (as a spoof of Dante's layers of hell. I am not Christan). Litterers were on the same level as murderers.

Very good, I agree, I don't like litter either. It's really annoying. Recycling is always good too. ^^ Very good rhyme

I agree with the message, and I especially loved the last 2 lines ^_^

A lot of the lines you used aren't really necessary (ex. "Please remember what I've said.") and the poem would be better without them.

You've touched on one of my own pet peeves here. I just hate it when those lazy, careless, self-absored (whoa, I guess I could point my finger at myself, sometimes) F^CK^RS decide they're going to mess up MY neighborhood. It makes me wish I could pick it up and dump it back in their car! With interest! Ah, well, enough ranting. -Piper Cub

Wow this is really good!! I definately like it. ...s'all for now.

omg, u r a good writer! this poem is xtremely kewl and should be posted somewhere where everyone can read it. a lot. like in schools or colleges or something

are you sure?
my dog did once,..or maybe that was a baby my sis babysitted when she ran with out her diper,...oh well!

Well, I found this very amusing, mainly that last line at the end. It's creative, simplistic, and direct. Very good!

hee hee hee hee hee

Good poem, dude... wish they could inconvenience themself in the slightest bit to help the world a great deal...